Reviews For One Wrong Move
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Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 7:03 PM Title: Johnny's Fate

Whoa.

In a good way :D!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 9:26 AM Title: Johnny's Fate

The story started off well but I didn't think there was enough of a build up if you don't midn me saying. I think more the relationship between Johnny and Elizabeth could have been explored. So what lead up to this moment.

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