Date: November 09 2011 12:34 PM Title: Misfortune
This was really interesting, although I'm sad that Ludwig, sorry, the ambassador, died.
Author's Response:
You are not the first one to state so. I will think twice before ending a likeable character's life too promptly like this. I'm glad you found it interesting and thanks for the comment !
Date: November 07 2011 11:49 AM Title: Misfortune
I enjoyed this story. If you continue to write I would be glad to continue to read.
Author's Response:
Thank you ! With comments like this I will continue gladly :D
Date: November 07 2011 1:39 AM Title: Misfortune
While I was hoping the little guy would survive, this story was still enjoyable due to Ambassador Ludwig's unique and grandiose way of speaking. You did a good job instilling him with character. I'd like to see more of this setting (though hopefully not all the sylvans get eaten).
Author's Response:
Thank you for the interest and the kind review =D I plan to turn this into something much more elaborated, yes. The sylvans will serve better purposes in that sequel, you are right on that one :)
[Report This]Date: November 05 2011 1:52 PM Title: Misfortune
Very cute little story. I am a big fan of vore.
Do you think you will be continuing with this setting?
Author's Response:
Thank you ! I'm glad you enjoyed this. As for the setting, I will eventually make a big story with good characterization and deepness revolving around this. My next project doesn't include this however. It will probably be ready during the incoming week and there will be good unaware vore inside ;)
[Report This]Date: November 04 2011 11:30 PM Title: Misfortune
very impressive story. im not a fan of micro or vore. but this story was well written an with likeable characters. hope to see more from you.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you aaron ! I'm happy that you got something out of it even though it is not what you prefer. That's a very inspiring first review and yes there will be more !