Reviewer: Orr4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Catching Bees with Honey

I LOVE this story.

The story revolves around a psychotic teenage girl who shrunk and kidnapped five different personalities and the thoughts of our hero, Jack, as he attempts to exploit the young, naive heart of this giantess who could end his small life in so many ways just so that he can save his fellow inmates before it is too late.

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I love the suspense you add and actually enjoy the plot chapters more than I do the so called 'fetish' chapters because of that suspense, not to say those sexually themed chapters aren't delicious >:)

Jack is  somebody who is easy to relate to and the differences in personalites with the other fellow prisoners adds more tension especially with him being younger. Then there is Julia who is indeed crazy (I love crazy giantesses :P) or psychotic might be better but is also very smart but her young teenage naiveness shows sometimes despite this. Her not only liking Jack but being obsessed with him makes the situation even crazier! Julia thinks she controls Jack's heart and is guiding the relationship but it's actually the tiny Jack who is taking advantage of the girl's first love. What will happen when he shatters it? I hope we don't find out anytime soon because I don't want a story like this to end anytime soon :D

Then there is even more stress with Brian starting to lose his mind and Anna being pregnant which causes there to be that sense of having only a little bit of 'time' left before Julia finds out and all hell breaks loose! There is the idea that Jack takes responsibility which would be insane!

Even more intriguing to me is the relationship with Gina and Jack. Gina obviously likes Jack and he obviously likes her to where he risks his life a couple of times for her but with Julia not only liking Jack but loving to the point of obsession, she is a smart girl although young and crazy, she will eventually see Jack's liking/love of her and maybe she will she get jealous eventually and use Gina's 'fear' to her advantage for revenge, will she use that to get Jack's true feelings out? Will she simply try to kill her tiny competetion or even get her involved? So much possibilities XD

It's all your story and honestly no matter what you do, you won't mess this up for me. I'm into everything there is when it comes to giantess fetish so anything you like, I damn sure like. So don't feel any time of embarrassment or think, will they think this chapter is too boring or over the top? Your skills come natural to you and your work might not seem much to you but to me, it kept me going yesterday as I took my time reading to savor the chapters you had. Please keep adding and I will continue to be on the look out!

Thanks for the fantastic read,

Orr4eva

Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, and I'm glad you enjoy the story so much. You raise some good questions that will, indeed, have answers by the time the story is over. It's nice to hear that someone likes the plot chapters so much, since I do tend to worry that this story is too plot-driven to be thoroughly enjoyed by all readers.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 29: Catching Bees with Honey

Excellent!

 

Moar cried the crowd.

Author's Response:

"Okay," cried the author in response to the crowd.