Date: October 15 2012 11:45 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
So glad to see Julia stopped by again. This chapter is very Blackmailesque, she's becomming a bit of a foot slut. Curious thing, there could be a very easy oops with a boyfriend in your boot.
Author's Response:
"Foot slut." I love that phrase. And you're certainly right to think that about the boot; that's actually something that will be brought up in the next chapter.
Date: October 10 2012 2:49 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
Those last two sentences sounded really final. I guess this means there won't be a chapter 45. :-(
Author's Response:
Oh, so wrong, good sir :)
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 11:22 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
I am stunned to say this but this may be one of your best chapters ever. You really feel hs mind slipping away with each paragraph.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad I still have the ability to up the ante.
Date: October 09 2012 11:17 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
After the thorough way he describes and catalogues everything in his surroundings, I'm leaning toward 'insane.' I don't believe a fully sane person would be able to keep his reason in that situation.
Author's Response:
probably not a bad assumption
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 2:44 PM Title: Act III: Animal, Chapter 44: Hope is Lost
Its backkk!!! Now I wait to let your genius DO WORK! great ch. by the way, I love an author who really gets into the mind of the charachters.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!