[Report This]Date: May 06 2014 9:09 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Wow, such a fast update! The chapter was great btw and it also served an important purpose...letting Jack tell Gina not to trust Charlie.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing man. I've recently gotten onto a roll with writing this thing, so there will be more to come after not too long.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2014 5:00 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Julia is an absolutely despicable human being, but it's part of what makes this story so interesting! I love reading about the battle of wits between her and Jack, an invisible battle fought with words and subtleless. It really feels more like a psychological thriller than a fetish story...I can't wait to see what you have planned for the finale, I can already see it'll be a doozy.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate the comparison to the thriller genre; that's definitely the atmosphere I'm going for.
Date: March 10 2014 4:12 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Still have faith that this story will get a proper ending, even if Im an old man by the time it happens XD
Author's Response:
I swear, I do have a fairly elaborate ending nicely planned out on my head. It just has to be, you know, typed out and stuff.
Date: December 07 2013 1:16 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Iliki
[Report This]Date: November 07 2013 5:01 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I absolutely love this story! All the twist and turns are so exciting! You make it seem like this is really happening... good job and please update soon! I've been waiting for this!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 9:23 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Daaamn this is a freaking masterpiece. I love the mixture of her emotional vulnerability, his manipulation and her effective omnipotence. Very few stories try something like this and even fewer do it so well.
Kinda reminds me of Oyayubihime actually. But way more intricate and awesome. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words. The relationship between Sayako and Yuuichi is one I hold up as the right way to show a giantess-tiny relationship, so that's high praise.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 8:25 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
The way you write Julia makes me almost sympathetic towards her, aalllmmmooost. It takes a lot of skill to write someone that is a complete monster and somehow make the audience feel for them a bit, so cookies for you! And the fact that Charlie ratted them out finally comes out, it seems like its Charlie who ACTUALLY loves her, whereas Jack is seducing her to try to find a way out of their predicament. Great Story! I've been with this for a long time and hope you come to a conclusion, however horrible or happy it may be.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! You are pretty darn close in your analysis of Charlie. We are slowly but surely moving toward a conclusion here, so stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: August 19 2013 5:18 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
If you are out of ideas, may I suggest going back to where Julia was extremely violent and cruel, like with Jim and Beth? That was a favourite thing of mine to read, and what got me hooked right from the first chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm actually not out of ideas, the ending is planned out, I'm just on a hiatus right now.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2013 7:50 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
It's been 5 months since the last chapter from my favourite story :(
Date: April 04 2013 3:45 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Well, this is a bit of a surprise. Where is Jack planning to take this?
Author's Response:
well, besides Julia's nipples, he's planning to take it to [spoilers]
[Report This]Date: January 22 2013 9:54 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Gah, this scrolling through chapters on my iPod hurts my thumb :p but it's definitely worth it. Great story!
Author's Response:
glad to hear it's worth the pain; thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2013 4:59 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Man, with how things are now, your going to have your work cut out for you to figure out a way to give these little guys a chance against Julia. Its seems pretty hopeless from where Im standing.
Author's Response:
excellent, if things are feeling hopeless right now, i've done my job well ;)
[Report This]Date: January 07 2013 4:01 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Man, I am not putting too much hope on a happy ending, because it doesn't seem like its possible at this point. But at least some sort of bittersweet ending, I just dont wanna see Julia win, she pisses me off so much! I guess your a good enough writter when a villan can make someone angry.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i'm glad i can get you to feel angry at Julia; that's definitely the intent. while i can't quite say the ending will be all sunshine and roses, with as much build-up as i've given here, you're going to see Julia's captives give her a run for her money before the story ends
[Report This]Date: December 04 2012 8:43 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I know that you'll say no (unfortunately) but maybe, hopefully, possibly just work on finishing Julia before your other stories? It's my favourite of your many great stories! :)
Author's Response:
thanks for the review; i'm glad you enjoy it so much. the main problem with just plowing through and finishing the story is that the sheer mass of this thing and its various dangling plotlines can be a little overhwhelming, so when I write it, I've really got to just get in the zone and pound out the chapters in large chunks, something which my schedule unfortunately rarely allows. i will return to it soon though
Date: December 02 2012 12:25 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Well, Julia is a cruel. Her fate to me... Chinese water torture while bleeding out never able to die but experiencing extreme pain every second of everyday. Forever. Also, she is having her guts pulled out every minute causing even more pain. And finally, all this and then be stepped on by the people she tortured. But can never die. She is the worst person ever...of all time. XD
Author's Response:
thanks for reading. i'm sure Julia's prisoners would agree with your plan
Date: November 21 2012 9:34 AM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I created an account specifically for this story. I love it and I am a huge fan of the protagonist. I would love to see things move in his direction soon!
Author's Response:
i certainly appreciate you doing that. i'm partial to the protagonist as well. stay tuned for further developments, the fight's not over yet
Date: November 20 2012 11:32 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Nice this story is back, i cant wait for it to finish.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 7:20 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
I feel like this is that story u dont want to read till its done because it is so well written, and when the story is done u want a sequel lol.If this is the final act then we are in for the rollercoster(named Julia) of our lifes. jacksmith5996=Greatness
Author's Response:
Yikes, let's not talk sequel until we're at the end of one story with enough main characters still intact, hmm? Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2012 4:12 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
This is one of the best GTS/shrink stories out there. Only hope it will continue and develope!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate you reading and reviewing!
Date: October 20 2012 12:13 PM Title: Act I: Prisoner, Chapter 1: Good Morning
Sorry got the wrong story mixed up in my post but I kind of imagine Julia is in some way a student at June and Carly's school lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's not a bad theory. Through tiny cameos and references to similar devices in the respective timelines, though, I do have an interconnected universe of sorts for all of the stories I've written for this site, but it's kind of hard to notice if you're not looking for it.