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Date: November 14 2011 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Mt. Toe and the end of Banthor

The story was quite origional and the brast crushing was a welcome change to the usual foot crush. The vore aspect was nice too and though I'm not usually a fan of a mena giantess I actually enjoyed your story, for the most part.

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Date: November 14 2011 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 3 - With More Denial comes More Punishment

Here: The woman starting grinning.

I think you mean started.

This chapter was good but I still felt it needed more description. Towards the end was better and I really like the twist you added in with Marvin suddenly taking his sword out. I also did not expect her to have his family with her so that was an interesting addtion.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Banthor is Attacked

Your story seems to be moving very fast and I felt the chapter was rather brief, although the plot sounds very interesting so I guess I'll read on.

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