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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Banthor is Attacked

Your story seems to be moving very fast and I felt the chapter was rather brief, although the plot sounds very interesting so I guess I'll read on.

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