[Report This]Date: February 10 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I had been reading your stories as a guest for a while and now that im registered I want to let you know that your stories are the BEST on this site.
your use of descriptive language is perfect, and your ability to create a realistic giantess has never ceased to amaze me.
10/10 this entire series was just epic
Author's Response:
thanks very much, i'm glad you enjoy the stories
Date: December 21 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
By the way, how old are they in this chapter?
Author's Response:
thanks for reading! in this chapter, unless i'm mistaken, Carly is 17 and Jack is 20.
Date: December 21 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I did the same thing Afroking did, after reading this chapter, I had to see Carly's fate at the end of ALB 3! An amazing chapter nontheless, something I have come to expect from you. :)
[Report This]Date: December 20 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I miss Carly! Definitely one of my favorite characters. Would love to see her end up coming out on top but after seeing your response to someone else, I don't think that is your plan :)
Another great chapter, thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! one thing i will note, though, is that my response was intended to mean Carly was beaten at the end of the 3rd story. once I post the sequel to that, anything is fair game again, so who knows?
Date: December 19 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
Tiny sister would have been great but a tiny brother seemed to give more dominance and more psychological.
Date: November 23 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
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[Report This]Date: November 01 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I really love how Carly likes to play and mess around with Jack but she makes sure that Jack is safe with her.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: July 25 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
Very good writing, as always, from you Jack. I very much enjoy all of your stories and hope you continue to produce more in the future.
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I love the Blackmail stories. These are my favorite stories on the site. Glad you are still continuing them.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks; i've enjoyed writing it a lot, and i appreciate the continued reviews from people who like reading it
[Report This]Date: February 15 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I have read and enjoyed all in Jack's series. The way you described Jack's interaction with carlys hands and mouth was quite vivid. As a hopeful romantic, I found Carly to be a cruel and unworthy goddess. If this was your intent, you were successful.
Author's Response:
that was definitely the intent ;) glad you've enjoyed the stories
[Report This]Date: January 24 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I've read and loved all of your "Blackmail" stories, but after reading you latest chapter I figured it was time I made an account and wrote a review. I'm a huge fan of Ugg boots and rather disappointed that Jack didn't get to see the inside of them! I hope that one of your future chapters will also feature them, and maybe some more sock play as well!
Again though, I love your writing and hope you continue! Thanks for the great stories!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, and i'm glad you've enjoyed the stories. sock play i'm sure will make a comeback at some point, as i happen to be a big fan of that. as for the Uggs, i'd have to find a way to make it interesting to write, but i'll definitely consider having a chapter at some point delve into that.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I lloved this chapter. I always love when his in her mouth. But I keeo thinking while she' drifted off in her hsid like she does sometime that Carly could accidentally swallow jack...LOL
Author's Response:
probably a very good concern to have... jack does happen to be a bit over two inches tall, so he may be a little large to swallow accidentally, but if carly focused, she could probably "do the deed" with relative ease
Date: December 24 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I love your series and i hope you continue. I would love to see him go on a date with her or used as a sex toy during there date. Maybe go to prom with her. And her friends use him. Please continue.
Author's Response:
thanks. don't hold your breath for the sex toy part, i'm not much into that, but i hope you continue to like the story
[Report This]Date: December 18 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
What a great concept. I love the idea of knowing what Carly feels when she tortures and humiliates Jack. Just from the way you describe the high she gets when she even thinks about torturing him is incredible. I think alnost anyone would do it if they could feel that good. Great chapter.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks, the goal was definitely to get you to understand where she's coming from
Date: December 18 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
im happy u decided to continue with this great series i hope u r gonna write some stories about actions in school like promoton night or some parties and carl will take jake with her. it would be interesting to imagine it. Anyway great job. Jurdzi
Date: December 18 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
This is amazing! An idea i've toyed with myself for awhile now. SM as a drug. it's the perfect way!
[Report This]Date: December 17 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
i love this series.
Date: December 17 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
I really enjoyed this journey into her mind.
You're antagonist always have such vivid changes in mood and behavior that it is rather nice to see into one of their minds during said processes.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Carly's Daydreams
Hey, it's great to see you back here! You're a prolific producer of oustanding material. No one can go at the pace you were going indefinitely. And, if anyone deserves to take a break or even reitre, it's you. That said, I completely agree with this in-between, short story approach. It's much more manageable and allows you to devle immediately into a scene without having to produce the necessary characterization and scenery, so to speak. I loved getting a glimpse into Carly's head. I've left a few stories unfinished and probably will never get around to finishing them. My honest advice would be to stream-line A Little Blackmail 3 and go with the ending you had orignally planned. I wish I had done this with a story of mine years ago, called, "Daddy's Fatal Attracton." If you don't think you'll ever finish the third and final chapter of this brother/sister epic, could you say how you planned to end it? Take care and do what you feel like doing. We are always happy to see anything you write.
Author's Response:
i'm not going to streamline it, i know how i want it to end, so there's no need to worry there. there's a reasonable chance that i will finish it at some point, too, so i'll leave that unsaid for now. if i ever do get too sick of it to finish, though, i'll at least toss up a quick explanation of how i wanted to end it. thanks for the review