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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 8:37 AM Title: Dinner plans

To answer Jake's italicized question? I think it's called "good in-breeding."

*Insert reprise of "Deliverance" theme, here.*

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 11:46 PM Title: Dinner plans

I also misread your intentions for the dinner party. With all those people and all that food, I thought for sure there'd be an almost-vore mishap or two. It's not an ideal environment for tiny people. They escaped unscathed but it sounds like the party isn't over. I wonder what Brittany was whispering.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 9:29 PM Title: Dinner plans

Chapters 16 & 17 were pretty good - lots of sexual tension.

These last two chapters apeared to be just social excahnges - boring...

Get back to the good stuff, please.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 8:46 PM Title: Dinner plans

well I totally misread your intentions for that chapter! No one even came close to getting eaten, lol. Thanks for the male content warning, it's not my thing but not a story killer for me either. I admire Jakes bravery or maybe it's stupidity? Either way, it's going to get him into trouble.

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