Date: June 17 2012 11:46 PM Title: Dinner plans
I also misread your intentions for the dinner party. With all those people and all that food, I thought for sure there'd be an almost-vore mishap or two. It's not an ideal environment for tiny people. They escaped unscathed but it sounds like the party isn't over. I wonder what Brittany was whispering.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2012 9:29 PM Title: Dinner plans
Chapters 16 & 17 were pretty good - lots of sexual tension.
These last two chapters apeared to be just social excahnges - boring...
Get back to the good stuff, please.
Date: June 17 2012 8:46 PM Title: Dinner plans
well I totally misread your intentions for that chapter! No one even came close to getting eaten, lol. Thanks for the male content warning, it's not my thing but not a story killer for me either. I admire Jakes bravery or maybe it's stupidity? Either way, it's going to get him into trouble.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2012 1:55 PM Title: Family Reunion
My family used to have annual reunions, for about twenty years. But, I wasn't too crazy about them, at first. The micro-managing fuss that went into setting them up beforehand killed whatever enjoyment I might (repeat: MIGHT) have gotten out of them, once they were in full swing. By the time I did get to enjoy them, the novelty had worn off for the older relatives...and the younger relatives were just plain permanently disinterested.
Long story, short ("too late!"): I empathize with Jake, completely!
Date: June 16 2012 1:45 PM Title: Family Reunion
I've gotta be honest, this story was kind of losing me with the ass insertion/toilet scene in an earlier chapter (not my thing). But the family reuinion at a fancy restaurant has me intrigued. All sorts of possibilities there. I look forward to seeing where you're going with it, though I hope Jake and Nique will make it through alive.
Date: June 16 2012 11:41 AM Title: Family Reunion
The last place I would want to be if I were those two is at a restaurant! I’m wondering if something sinister is coming? Obviously our hero won't be exiting the story, but I wonder if Nique is "accidentally" going to get a one way ticket to someones stomach??? Can't wait to see where you go with this!
Date: June 14 2012 4:02 PM Title: Promises
Woohoo! Another chapter, I love this story. I wonder if they will all honor the agreements they have with Jake or will they still use Nique anyway? After all, they are bigger and can do what they want! And all though I would have loved a play by play on what Nique went through, it was pretty cool how you wrote it. Thanks for continuing with the story!
[Report This]Date: June 13 2012 3:14 PM Title: Promises
Strike up the banjo, Jake.
"Doot-doot-DOOT-doot-Doot! Doot-doot! Doot-doooooooo!"
Author's Response:
yee haw
[Report This]Date: May 08 2012 12:35 PM Title: .....and I'll scratch yours
*Reviewer can only shake his head in sympathy.*
Date: May 07 2012 8:17 PM Title: The Relatives
Oh... that cruel minx!
Date: May 06 2012 8:28 PM Title: .....and I'll scratch yours
Loving this story! I hope Brittany has a lot more fun with Jake! Great job with fleshing out the different personalities of the sisters. Looking forward to the next chapter!
For those of you reading this story and not leaving feedback, you suck ass, losers.
Author's Response:
haha, I appreciate you're support, and yeah! losers! :P
Date: April 25 2012 1:02 PM Title: You scratch my back....
Another excellent chapter! I think he can expect to make more visits into Emily's cunny now that she knows how good it felt. Can't wait to see how it goes with Britttany, he should be weary of that girl. Love the way this is shapping up!
[Report This]Date: April 25 2012 10:07 AM Title: You scratch my back....
I can't help wondering if Emily will give Brittany a sort of one-sided advance warning about what she and Jake just did.
Date: April 09 2012 2:01 PM Title: Unexpected pleasures
WOW! Very hot chapter. Insertion rules! I didn't see that coming, if anything, I was thinking she was going to become very tempted to swallow him. Phew, damn good stuff sir, damn good.
Date: April 09 2012 1:51 PM Title: The Relatives
Insertion... Love it!!
I thank you with all of my heart and what's left of my soul. Thank you.
Date: April 08 2012 5:31 PM Title: Unexpected pleasures
P.S.---if memory serves, it's Brittany who has the light brown hair. While Emily is a long-haired blonde.
Author's Response:
oh snap, I'm basing these characters off of real people, she must have changed her hair!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2012 5:28 PM Title: Unexpected pleasures
"...I thought she was the sane one..."
I laughed when I read that. Because, it reminded me of that scene, in the Marx Brothers movie "Cocoanuts, where Groucho is trying to explain about contracts with sanity clauses. And, Chico replies: "You can't-ah fool-ah me. There's-ah no such-ah thing as-ah Sanity Claus."
X-D
Date: April 08 2012 2:09 AM Title: Unexpected pleasures
I really got to say if i saw insertion i wouldnt have read it well hopefully i will find another story
[Report This]Date: April 07 2012 7:36 PM Title: A small treat
Wow!
More than one thousand words in a single chapter. :)
Author's Response:
This moment shall be catalouged in human history for all time
[Report This]Date: April 07 2012 2:24 PM Title: A small treat
GRRRRRRRRRRRR!
I've no doubt Emily knows that whole display, during dinner, was all her mother's fault. But, she wants to have some sadistic fun with Jake, and this gives her the perfect excuse.