Reviewer: stastny1986 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I really hope you continue, this is by far the best mini GTS story I've ever read.

Reviewer: djubre666 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Wow.. The story is about a 12 hunderd views shy of 25k. 

I'm interested how you guys see Megan, in other words if there is any illustration or render closest to your vision please leve a link, you can send it as a message or leave the link here. Also if anyone knows a good similar story add the link as well... it's good for inspiration to read other material.

Thanks guys

Reviewer: GTMike Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Really enjoyed the first three quarters of  your story. Excellent writing, great characters really good build, but then it just seemed to taper off. It got a little too tecknical for me when we start to get exact numbers of height and measuring, and where precisely arms are placed and things like that, but that's probably just me. I just think every story has a natual end and this one went a little past that. From your reviews, I'm way in the minority, so feel free to ignore these comments.

Author's Response:

Thanks GTMike, I actually really appreciate a honest review. I see your point and I somwhat agree with you. But at the moment the story is still stronger than me and will probably continue untill I find a natural end to it. 

Reviewer: cpgrad08 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Megan should never stop growing.

Author's Response:

She does agree with you, and will consider

Reviewer: djubre666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Thanks for the replies guys. Will try to be as productive as possible :)

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

The anticipation is killing me. I just can't get enough of this. This site needs more writers like you.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Oh, please tell me you're not done! I need more of this... this masterpiece! I need some of Megan's fine, sweet ass!

Reviewer: djubre666 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Thanks for the comments, errors noted... and there will pobably be even more of them following. Rereading is such a pain :) so thank you.. 

I'm off to post chapter 2

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Sorry for submiting my review more than once. I notice the spacing went a bit too wide when I copied it into giantessword.

Your story is good and I am really enjoying it so far. There aren't many spelling or grammar mistakes (except for no speech marks!!!!! sorry, needed emphasis. I'm finding trouble telling speech apart from his thoughts in some places) although I did notice a few things. I hope you don't mind me pointing out these errors. If you don't want me to then I won't in future.

The management and tailors worked normal 8-16, and 16-21 was only for pick-up or placing orders and getting measured.

I assume those are working hours but I'm not exactly sure they are relevant and they just make the paragraph more wordy. Also here:

This was where I got in, My job was to spend

You seem to start a new sentence and yet you have a comma.

Here.. and she extends one massiv hand

Needs an E on the end.

And here:

so tiny next to my arm... How much do you weight..

weigh.

As I came to pick over

I think you mean peek.

 her breast were.. beyond big

Breasts.

and above it her lovely face.. see anything you like tiny..

And here, he's thinking and then she suddenly says something but it's not on a separate line or even separated by speech marks.

And again here:

. to have you mind.. blown.. for me seeing her stature