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[Report This]Date: February 06 2012 5:54 PM Title: The Girl Opposite
Short and sweet - I like it very much, especially the girl as an abstract idea ("She was ageless, an image of an ancient dominance over men") rather than a 'mere' character. It sort of illustrates the symbolism of what GTS is all about (to me, that is).
I often find 'dream-like' stories much easier to get into than any attempt of a 'realistic' depiction.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2012 4:51 PM Title: The Girl Opposite
First off let me start by saying that, while short, this was very well written. The only problems I had were with the intro. While I can appreciate wanting to get to the action part quickly, spending just a bit more time establishing setting, and your main characters would be good to lead into the rest of the story. It's normally tough to make a character seem mysterious, and not make it seem like the author was just lazy about their characterization, but you did that very well. I liked that the girl was never named as well, adding to her mystery.
Still, much better written than I had expected. Expanding just a tiny bit more on what's going on at all times, as well as the intro when establishing setting can usually help though. Once the actual action scene did start things progressed a bit faster than expected, but overall it's a good piece. Hope you do some more sometime.