Date: April 15 2019 8:29 AM Title: Homecoming
Bad breath,maybe, and also go a little bit more into details,but other than that great start
Date: January 28 2018 9:42 PM Title: Homecoming
why are brothers always older and bullies,and why do you have to have s--t scene that is gross it takes away anything sexy about the story you almost had a good story plus the story just started then it ends
[Report This]Date: May 14 2017 10:25 PM Title: Homecoming
are you going to write any more because it starts then stops.I can't tell much about the story and why have farting, I mean it stinks sence you did'nt write that much ,look how long ago this story been wrote
Date: November 19 2012 12:49 AM Title: Homecoming
Nice chapters. I aould be grat if she used the wax to hold firm to her skin. Other good ideas is dhe could sew her brother into her underware, bra, socks, or shoes. There are many ideas you could use. Hope you decide to continue writing, it is a great story so far.
Date: April 16 2012 8:09 PM Title: Beginning
If you are reading this, please do more. I completely forgot about this gem of a story, and now that I have reread it, I need more.
If you can read this, please update! Or at least write back saying you are busy. We wnt to know you're still alive. We can't afford to lose an author as great as you.
Date: February 09 2012 6:39 PM Title: Beginning
I do love the second chapter, but I felt there could've been more detail on Nathalie's ass. The whole foot genre is a little worn out, but shit and farts are still, for lack of a better phrase, pretty fresh.
Author's Response:
Yeah I will be putting more detail in this next chapter. sorry.
BUT! There will be some small parts with the feet. And one more part with the feet. Some more ass and others, YEAH!!!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2012 3:57 AM Title: Beginning
thats actually good. Im a fan of butt, too. so i would like to see more! XD
and I like that his mistress is his sister, i would LOVE to see her traping her brother up her ass whenever she don't want to play with him, like his new home! XD
keep it going i loved your story so i'll be checking on you from no and on XDD
Author's Response:
Thats coming up next! And thank you, you gave me some ideas! I am writing the next chapter right now, should be on near the end of the day or tomarrow! ;)
Date: February 07 2012 6:45 PM Title: Beginning
All I can say is more. I need more of that wonderful ass! Please, give us more ass, more poop, more farting! PLEASE!
Author's Response:
Lol, dont worry there will be more of that! This story is mainly about all i can think of. But there will be more.
coming up next will be some feet and ass. poop and farting later... ;) soon though!