Date: April 15 2019 8:29 AM Title: Homecoming
Bad breath,maybe, and also go a little bit more into details,but other than that great start
Date: January 28 2018 9:42 PM Title: Homecoming
why are brothers always older and bullies,and why do you have to have s--t scene that is gross it takes away anything sexy about the story you almost had a good story plus the story just started then it ends
[Report This]Date: May 14 2017 10:25 PM Title: Homecoming
are you going to write any more because it starts then stops.I can't tell much about the story and why have farting, I mean it stinks sence you did'nt write that much ,look how long ago this story been wrote
Date: November 19 2012 12:49 AM Title: Homecoming
Nice chapters. I aould be grat if she used the wax to hold firm to her skin. Other good ideas is dhe could sew her brother into her underware, bra, socks, or shoes. There are many ideas you could use. Hope you decide to continue writing, it is a great story so far.