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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

A good opener to a story that's a refreshing change of pace. I'm now off to chapter 2.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is getting hot! Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very good start and happy yo see you are making the extra effort to make it easy to read. Paragraphs are always appreciated as opposed to HUGE blocks of text. Looking forward to some great SW action! DO continue...

Reviewer: Frollo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

This looks very promising, and nice writing style. I enjoy the setup and tention that's building. May the twisted thoughts begin. ;)

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