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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter Three

Wow. This story is remarkably realistic. I like reading about how Rose seemed to be having second thoughts. But was honestly shocked when she took her own life because her guilt was to much to bear. Hope that Brent an Tom will either repent(more so Brent) or just be so consumed with their own wickedness that there will be no coming back.

aaron
Ps why is hades calling himself Satan? I only ask because it's kinda confusing having Aphrodite an Satan in the same story. But that's my only problem.

Author's Response:

Good question! My much, much longer story "The Wager" touches on the pantheon in this universe; suffice to say that in this world, pretty much every god, from Kunapipi to Jesus, exists.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter Three

*Shakes his head @ Tom.*

"That way lies madness!"

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