Reviews For Birthday Surprise
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Reviewer: LittleLad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: Stairway to Heaven

Minor spag error 'exudation-doused toes' should be 'exudate-doused toes' an exudate is a fluid with a high content of protein (like sweat) wheras exudation the action of exuding. Once a biologist...Still a biologist. Aide from that you're absolutly my favorite writer on this site. Keep it up dude!



Author's Response:

Ah, I see; thanks for catching that, and for reading.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 3: Stairway to Heaven

Unaware footplay.....probably my most favorite aspect of this fantasy.  Havent gotten around to reading this whole story closely yet, but briefly skimming this chapter caught my attention.  Knowing your other stories, I bet its a real treat.

Keep it up dude!



Author's Response:

thanks, i'm glad this story is to your taste

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Stairway to Heaven

Great update. Spectacular detail!!
Cannot wait to see what happens next.

aaron

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