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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Slight Wrinkle

Story is just great. An your details are superb. I just hope that it doesn't turn to VORE.. But some mouth play wouldn't hurt. Love how she casually chats with her husband completely oblivious to her sons plight. Awesome job on conveying that scene.

aaron

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