Date: May 23 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom
Quite right enjoyed it. A bit more interested though in what life for little Alex have been with mum if she found him.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom
I think you know that I think you are a very gifted writer. It's taken me quite awhile to read the rest of this story. I have been quite sick for awhile.
I enjoyed the story very much. I would have preferred the son didn't die. But hey that was the choice you went with and you did very well. Not what I normally like to read on here. I prefer the torture stuff. But I did enjoy this story very much.
Dave
[Report This]Date: May 06 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Happy Birthday, Mom
You are a fantastic writer, and you have truly captured a scenario that I previously had only witnessed in my imagination. I love how you focus on more than just providing the scenario. You provide excellent character development and let us into the mind of the protagonist in a way that makes the story stand above others of its type.
And I'm glad you decided to go with the ending you did.
Author's Response:
thanks! i'm glad you liked the ending, i realize it wasn't particularly original, but my goal here was just to play it safe and see how it went since i'm not used to writing this genre.