Date: December 13 2013 9:43 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
Every now and then I keep asking myself: "Why, why do you still refresh this page here and there just in case it gets to be updated?"
And I came to the conlcusion: "Because I secretly hope Exiguus will update this fucking good story one day."
Author's Response:
Thanks Luidgi, I'm sorry for the long gap between chapters.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2013 3:34 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
I love this story and hope you continue it soon. I love your Ideas and how this story is playing out.
Author's Response:
Thanks again zephilia. :)
Date: June 17 2013 2:27 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
I am afraid this story won't be updated anymore, and I think it is very sad. Such a good piece of work.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2013 6:11 AM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
One of my favorite storys on this site! I check everyday for updates haha!
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot!
[Report This]Date: April 21 2013 6:09 AM Title: Sister's Keeper
I love this story hope you finish this and family toe jam.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: March 21 2013 6:35 PM Title: Anna's Toe-Jam
Honestly, I'd be very glad if you could update your story like, anytime soon. I'm anxious to read the next chapeter, which will reach the milestone of 10. If you lack ideas, I have a lot, your story is a real good one and makes my mind go wild. Keep up Exiguus.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I hate to say it, but I'm far too busy to dedicate much time to the story right now, and that'll probably be the case for a few weeks. I had gotten about half of the next chapter written before things picked up. Thanks for the encouragement.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2013 7:14 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
This is probably my favorite story on this site. I love how there's actual hope there. The characters are complicated and incredibly well-written. And it's wishful thinking, considering the latest chapter's reveal, but I hope things end well for Alisa.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you like the characters... I'm trying to make them believable and real.
Date: March 10 2013 9:25 AM Title: Sister's Keeper
great story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2013 6:46 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
Just started following this little piece. I've been gone for a couple months because of busy-ness, and this is a great way to come back. Love it.
The church scene in your most recent chapter was a nice mix of twistedness and innocence. Also, looking forward to the kindly 'research' your 'serious professional woman' has planned--with all good intentions.
-scrymgeour
Author's Response:
Thanks... I was a bit hesitant to throw religion into the mix, but I had always intended that to be a motivating factor for our antagonists.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2013 10:39 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
Light at the end of the tunnel...
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: March 08 2013 7:57 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
Loving this story! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoy the story!
Date: March 08 2013 5:36 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
You have to know, that every time I read this story I just get... Angry.
This is by far the cruelest story I've read in a long while, but it NEEDS to be. It's such a well crafted psychological mess.
Somehow, I know how Alisa feels, the whole situation is just so human yet unreal.
I'm very impressed, keep going, really, this is by far my favorite story around.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like the story.
Date: March 08 2013 5:26 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
Nice nice nice. I like this story very much and I refresh the page everyday to get the next piece of action. I pretty much enjoy when things are intense and a bit out of hand. This chapter is softer than the other, but still good. I hope Alisa goes inshoe even more, I don't know why. I feel her predicament is somehow bad, yet inveitable. Anna's part is so far my favorite because she's so cruel and friendly at the same time, strong character.
Whatever you do, don't stop writing this story, it's going up the most read and most reviewed for sure. You're a very good writer.
Luidgi
Author's Response:
Thanks. Anna will be back pestering Alisa in the next chapter, so I hope you like it.
Thanks for the feedback.
Date: March 08 2013 3:39 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
Awesome chapter. I know it's early but in this story I do hope Alisa has a happy ending,
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't know yet whether that will be the case, but eventually we'll get there I hope. :)
Date: March 08 2013 2:34 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
Once again, awesome chapter! Please, keep up your nice work. Your style is great!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! I appreciate the feedback.
Date: March 08 2013 12:07 PM Title: Sister's Keeper
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
I can't help re-reading Ms Pattie's last sentence and think of what that "something" could be...
Anyway, great to see you seem to have enough spare time to write two chapters in a few days!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 11:36 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
well here I am hopeing to see a new update lol. just wanted to let u know I dont want u to rush the story I know your busy, (like every good writer is) but dear god plz dont have me desperate for months lol.
Oh yea Ive been wanting this wendy ch. since she was first introduced, I would like more ch. with her like how u had 3 in a row with anna. As u can see they are by far my 2 fav characters.
Author's Response:
You can definitely expect to see more of Anna in upcoming chapters. Thanks for the response!
Date: February 26 2013 4:52 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Looks like Alisa and I are the only ones who can't wait to see Ms. Pattie again :(
Seriously, it's great to see you're back!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 24 2013 10:40 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Love the story and love how the girl changes, Hope to read more, keep the great literature coming.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm really striving to keep Alisa's state-of-mind believable, above all else.
Date: February 24 2013 10:13 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Good to see you back! You discribe the scenes very well and I can`t wait to see Alisa under Wendy`s feet.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.