[Report This]Date: August 03 2013 8:42 PM Title: After Dinner
I understand why people are feeling sorry for him, I would be more surprised if most wouldn't. Well, I also felt sorry for him sometimes. Also feel the overwhelming feeling of power, confidence and excitement Michelle feels each time she grows or realizes how much more of her fills his mind and body.
And this is exactly why immersion is such a wonderful thing. To almost feel what he feels, all the humiliation and such. I believe Michelle have a massive crush on Nicky. A very very unhealthy one. I believe she truly wants to own him. What most people forget is that 'love' isn't always demonstrated in caring gestures and acts. Nicky had his chance to have a gentle Michelle in the past, but he was a dick. He humiliated her, he hurt her both physically and mentally in a cruel way. But she is very very clever and intelligent, I think she realized this type of approach wasn't the right one to have him. To truly have Nick Avery for herself.
Now Nicky have to pay for his mistakes, and endure this new Michelle. The towering goddess who found the perfect way to break him and have the man she wished. I would be more sad if she turned to be all gentle with him right now, I would feel inclined to stop reading. Don't get me wrong, I love gentle stories. But I it would be so weird, for me, not making any sense if Michelle suddenly changed her approach to the old one. Nick over and over showed how much he 'tries' in vain to take advantage of her fake gentle side. She knows this. He just want her to be his trophy, he don't want to belong to her. I don't know how much of what I said is true, it is what I believe.
This is why, even though it's not my fave genre, I'm loving this story. Because its make sense to me, its exciting and well written. This is what separates a good story from a bad one for me. And this is a wonderful one.
Just my thoughts. Heh n.n Don't mind what I say, I just like, and feel the need, to speak/write what is in my mind sometimes.
Author's Response:
Well, I recall you like gentler stories, so I'm glad (and a bit surprised) you're still enjoying this one. I get what you're saying and it's a really interesting way to look at it actually. I can neither confirm nor deny what you said at this point :P. But what you said might come into play in an interesting way (I hope it's interesting, anyway...)
Date: August 03 2013 8:12 PM Title: Dinner
God, she's such a tease. Is she EVER gonna give it up?
Author's Response:
Hmm, I'm suprised you wouldn't rather she just keep tormenting him rather than give him that pleasure. Based on what I've read of your stories anyway (which I'm starting to look at now and quite enjoying, btw).
Date: July 28 2013 6:19 AM Title: The Lab Partner
New chapter today :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's the plan anyway, if I finish in time ... how did you know? lol, do I always release chapters on the weekends? I hadn't realized.
Date: July 22 2013 5:00 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Story continues to be awesome . Not that you need the help, but I think it would be cool if some of the other girls that have picked on nick got there hands on the formula and uses some of his old guy friends to grow too .....maybe Cindy making a comeback much larger ....or even Nicky having a kid sister Mayne around 13 to 15
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll just tell you, though, that I generally prefer to fixate on just a couple main characters. In this story, everything I've written is geared towards developing Nick and Michelle's relationship over time, and it just wouldn't fit in my thought process to switch to other storylines with other characters. I'd rather make it a whole separate story instead.
Oh, but kid sister, you say? Yes, I'll definitely be writing stories with that theme in the future, you have my word :)
Date: July 19 2013 6:50 AM Title: The Lab Partner
He hasn't even seen those tig ol' bitties yet. It's not time for it to end.
Author's Response:
Right :)
Date: July 19 2013 12:14 AM Title: Back Home
Am starting to feel sorry for Nick, Michelle is playing him, she is putting on an act being all sweet and nice to him making him thinking he is incharge when he in truth is not. Its all part of her plan.
Am starting to not like seeing Nick so easy manipulated by her. Yes he was a dick and asshole when he was normal but he has gone through more than enough now for some stupid experiment.
He has been gone for a week or so, his family has to be worried about him. Its time for the experiment to end, Michelle has made her point enough.
Am just feeling bad for Nick now.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm sorry to hear that. Personally, I love seeing male characters get manipulated and tormented like this, but I know it might not be for everyone.
On a practical note, I didn't do a good job of making this clear but I wrote in a part where Nick's parents go off on a cruise during this week in the story, the idea being that they don't know about what's happening to Nick back home. (I went back and added this and a couple other things to the early chapters about a month or two ago, but it might have flown under people's radar ... sorry if that's the case for anyone)
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 8:58 AM Title: The Lab Partner
This story has been nothing short of incredible. I'm really pulling for Nick but I have a bad feeling about his near future.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Some people have told me they're rooting for him, and some wanting to see him fall. It's interesting to hear both sides :)
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 8:51 AM Title: The Lab Partner
Was just wondering, are we far off the halfway point, or are we past that?
Author's Response:
Not halfway yet.
So, you know, it'll probably be several more decades until it's all posted ... jk :P
Date: July 13 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chemistry
She's either deviously making Nick her obedient little mindless slave or forcing them both to go into a vegetable state of mind.
Author's Response:
Uh-huh :). Things will become a little more clear soon, I think.
Date: July 07 2013 7:25 AM Title: Lunch
Yeah, I sort of wonder if the principal took the formula. I also wonder Michelle can read Nick's mind.
Author's Response:
Interesting thoughts...stay tuned
Date: July 06 2013 2:49 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Will anyone else use the formula
Author's Response:
I'd rather not say at this point, to avoid giving things away in later scenes ...
Date: July 05 2013 9:58 PM Title: Lunch
I was hoping Michelle would give Nick's former friends a taste of their own medicine. I really like where this story is going. I like the concept of a really small guy but everyone still respects him cause his gf is huge.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'm afraid Nick's old friends won't play much of a role in the rest of the story though (just one more scene after this).
[Report This]Date: July 01 2013 6:19 PM Title: The Lab Partner
Love this story, man. Especially that you never seem to fall into one place of comfort; the plot constantly is changing and it works. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's hard to do with such a long story, so I'm glad things still feel fresh.
Date: June 30 2013 6:50 PM Title: The Lab Partner
So, so good.
Even though I had my doubts with the change in direction, the last two chapters have really sold things to me. I can't wait to see what is to come.
Author's Response:
Thanks :). Things will really start heating up next chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 10:56 AM Title: The Lab Partner
This is a brilliant story. See you in a decade for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, something like that.
Date: June 21 2013 8:51 PM Title: Back on Top
How long has the experiment been going on for? I want to say maybe a few weeks, but when I read this it feels like months.
Author's Response:
haha, well, there's been a little over 2 weeks total I think so far, but one of those weeks was just briefly glossed over at the start of chapter 1. So, basically, barely a week since they first took the potion.
Just wait though -- the days will really start stretching out after this... When I finished the first draft I looked back and couldn't believe how little time had passed within the story. I'll be interested to see what people think of the pacing.
Date: June 13 2013 4:39 PM Title: The Lab Partner
I suspect I have things figured out on the potion side of things, but I don't want to spoil it in case I do.
Date: June 12 2013 11:53 PM Title: Taking Control
little mikey used CONFUSION!
It was super effective!
Author's Response:
lol
Date: June 12 2013 9:33 PM Title: Taking Control
My goodness, they're both so... Manipulative. At this point I'm not even sure WHAT these potions are doing, and I'm beginning to wonder if Michelle even knows how to reverse it. The first couple times when they made those potions it seemed like she knew what she was doing, but now it seems like "Let's throw this together and hope it doesn't kill us."
Author's Response:
Mmm, yes, excellent. My plan to confuse them is working ... <cue annoying evil laugh> :P
[Report This]Date: June 09 2013 10:27 AM Title: Vulnerability
Nick is so gullible. Hah :P
Author's Response:
;)