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Reviewer: Kaku50 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2019 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

Continua esta historia

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh damn

Reviewer: SuicidalCyborg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

AMAZING story, i read straight from chapter 1 to 23, it was like a book you just couldnt put down! i absolutely love it! all the detail, all the imagination, all the twists and truns, they combine so well! Keep going with this! its just too good! If you are the author, i am proud to say that you are a gift... speaking of gifts... could you "gift " the process of uploading a story or chapter to a seiries, or a story to a story (whatever)... i would really like to expand on this with my own writing, of course, ill be sure to show a sample to you before producing the finished edit, but i just cant leave this story alone! also i have another 2 stories id like to publish on here (as i dont know yet how to publish i might need your help with that) and id really like your advice and critique on how to improve them... One last thing, check out " a chance with a cougar " and one other (when im able to find it, that one is a masterpiece ), im sure youd love to read one... Youre very much like their style of writing, but yours is just much more...creative, thats the word! Now, go be awesome and continue!

P.S. Good luck on your school work! im sure youll get a graduation for your writing skills XD

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Excellent chapters both 22 and 23. I apparently missed the time when you posed 22, so I read both chapters together.

Wow, things have drastically changed. To me the best stories, giantess and non-giantess, are the ones that have things that are unexpected but also make sense.

Chapter 21 gave us a hint with the make me a mom commercial, but I never suspected that it was where all the men come from.

It's also interesting that a defected man was actually a special one. No names but numbers. This just further explains how little importance a man is in this world. Just a mere sex organ that women can eventually shove inside them.

Reminds me of those insects that have the female eating the male or when the male becomes attached to the larger female as an organ and he becomes part of her.

So what about the men that weren't made in the lab like Dean. They don't expire, so I wonder what's going to happen next.

I think this is the first time that Nina had sex with Dean. Seems like they both enjoyed it. Nina could carry Dean in her panties. That might be fun for both of them, or more to Nina.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Ah, makes sense, I'm writing a story similar to this type of awakening. Where everyone is in there own little world.

Reviewer: writer27 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 23

I was hoping that in fact there had been an alternate reality and that his teacher was trying to find a way into it. This is still a fun read please continue.

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