Reviewer: Pico Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 10: Just in Time for Lunch.

Keep those chapters coming, I love how this story is unfolding.

This was rather a short chapter. Luckily for Gabriel he was released from Dorci very soon. I thought you were gonna get her get away with kidnapping him. And that Emily had to go on a rescue mission.

If Dorci is known for kidnapping several boys and men... why isn't she in juvy? It makes me wonder what her previous exploits were.

I like the relationship between Gabriel and Emily. I commented on GTScity that it was borderline incest in the beginning of the story.

But now Emily has come to maturity I guess. She really loves her brother... like a brother. I hope there won't be any improper behavior between the two of them. (But you are free to do as you like.) It would be nice to have a gentle GTS story, where the GTS is the sister.

Storing her brother between her boobs... well... okay, guess that's acceptable. More practical I guess. :D

Author's Response:

Well, thank you for the well thought out, and king review. There will be a few moer...sexual moments between Gabriel, and Emily, but the incidents will be more accidental than on perpous on either parties.