Date: June 27 2014 3:40 PM Title: Prologue
Please don't leave us hanging bro.
Date: June 11 2013 8:26 PM Title: Prologue
These are a few weird questions that have been bugging me for the entirety of your absence, so if you've got an answer, that'd be great. Do the Calculi not bear children because of population control? (Having children=more mouths to feed) plus they're all on the verge of starvation anyways so is it just to make sure everyone starves less? Because they seem to be a sort of human-insect hybrid, these are the awkward questions that have been plaguing me: Do the Calculi women possess breasts? Also, though rare, do they birth live spawn, like humans, or eggs, like insects? Please satisfy my curiosity!
Date: June 11 2013 8:19 PM Title: Prologue
Does a Calculus' antennae serve a function like it does for true insects as a sort of communicator or is it purely vestigial and just to add to their insect-like appearance?
[Report This]Date: June 11 2013 8:15 PM Title: Prologue
I would find it funny if at some point in this trilogy Nami actually manages to make it back to Sanctuary but when she's halfway through the door and relived to be home, Tracy drags her out by her legs kicking, screaming in terror, and desperately clawing at the ground for help.
Date: June 10 2013 2:17 PM Title: Prologue
Is this going to turn into a "giantess communicates through dreams" deal? SHPOOKY.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2012 5:20 PM Title: Prologue
If you update in the next 7-11 days, it'll be a great Christmas present!
Date: September 20 2012 4:23 PM Title: Prologue
I have reason to believe that you are dead.
Date: July 30 2012 11:37 PM Title: Prologue
So Calculus means "little pebble," eh? I didn't know that. Is there a reason for the Latin influence on the Calculi? I noticed it in some of the names.
Poor Leigh, I know how she feels. I can be pretty useless in social situations or around the opposite sex sometimes.
I like that you don't depict any of the giantess's dialogue. Their inability to communicate really drives home how foreign and bizarre they are to each other.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yea there is actually a reason for the passing Latin references. I already have these three stories planned out in my head for the most part, and the source for this influence will probably be explained in the thrid installment.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2012 4:38 PM Title: Prologue
I am absolutely in love with this story!
Author's Response:
Great, glad to hear! Adding a new chapter now. It'll be done in about an hour.
[Report This]Date: July 26 2012 8:24 PM Title: Prologue
this is very well written my only problem is that the texxt needs to be broken into smaller paragrphs but christ, this is a ten
Author's Response:
Haha, very glad your enjoying it :). The paragraphs may be grouped together because I type this up first in word, and when you paste it into the text box that giantessworld provides you, it kind of messes with the spacing. I'll try to fix it here in upcoming ch's.
Date: July 26 2012 4:45 PM Title: Prologue
I appreciate the plug in your story note. Anyway, per your request, I gave your story a look.
I applaud your choice of genre; I tend to regard the fantasy, plot-driven stories as the most difficult to write, since you actually have to stay more conscious of potential plot holes and character consistency even more than in purely fetish-oriented tales, and you seem to be doing a fine job of it so far. Your characters are reasonably life-like considering their short development time so far in just a few chapters, and your dialogue fits with the setting. The above-average vocab makes the prose a little more pleasant to read, as well.
The main suggestion I'd give is to watch your use of heavy personal description, ie in the prologue when you describe your giantess character. Particularly in a story like this, given POV-style, it becomes more important to maintain a voice to avoid pulling the reader out, and so that section felt a little out of place compared to what a real person would use in speech; try weaving those bits of description in with the passing narrative instead. Again, a tiny gripe; just something to perhaps think about in future chapters. Good luck!
Date: July 25 2012 11:52 PM Title: Prologue
How is Xi pronounced?
Author's Response:
"Zshi". It's kind of like "she" just with the "z" sound.
Date: July 25 2012 4:55 PM Title: Prologue
Nice verbage and definitely curious.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: July 25 2012 12:58 AM Title: Prologue
i belive that this story can be great, i personaly love fantasy storys that involve fetish an small females. but your context is hard to follow. i mean some of the words you used seemed hard to follow. not saying its bad but it slows down the story. i do belive that this will be a great series and i will read in an enjoy it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll definately try to make sure the story flows better. Although there will be fetish content in the story, I am going to try to focus more on the emotional state of my characters and the plot. I feel that stories with poor content are just no fun to read :(