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Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 11:42 PM Title: Biography

i like it, fun stuff :)

Reviewer: LittleLad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 10:27 AM Title: Biography

wow a character with a believable thought process nice intro dude

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 7:40 PM Title: Biography

You post the second chapter; I'll be here to read and review it. :-)

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Date: August 09 2012 1:44 PM Title: Biography

Not a bad opener. Will Vanessa be making a more major appearance, later on?

Author's Response: Sorry. Vanessa is in a different state. I hope this doesn't detract you from reading the story.

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