[Report This]Date: October 10 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Somehow, I forgot to review this back when you were originally writing it. That's unfortunate, because I really enjoyed this story a lot.
I absolutely loved the descriptions of the different women, and I felt that the experiences with each one was unique. Feet are somewhat difficult to describe, yet you handled it so effortlessly. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks, littlemac, always a pleasure hearing from a fellow author I respect as much as you.
Date: August 16 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Awesome! Really enjoyable short. Looking forward to the finale!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
alot of fun like the first one, keep going
[Report This]Date: August 15 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
I usually love your stories. But this one seems like the same thing over and over. Good story but not great.
Dave
Author's Response:
thanks for your honesty, although with due respect, i think you may have gone into the story with the wrong expectations; this is more of a short, single genre-focused story as opposed to my longer ones that include more variety
[Report This]Date: August 12 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Very good! I've always liked the Mother/son scenario in shrinking stories and yours falls right in and is done very well. On the other hand I have never really been a fan of stories that gather huge groups of women (the soccer team, the cheer-leading squad, etc.) to abuse the tiny. The Book Club however is a good touch, taking each woman in turn in each chapter. Looking forward to more and thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. i too am not really a fan of stories that gather a group of women soley to abuse the shrunken, so i'm trying to emphasize that this is a book club that the mother is taking advantage of to punish her son as an added bonus rather than unrealistically inconveniencing a group of people just for that
[Report This]Date: August 10 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
I love that you went back to this theme! I think the mother/son scenarios, when done well, are among the best stories in this genre. Obviously, I'm hoping things get out of hand in this story, and Mom does the unthinkable... You continue to showcase excellent word choice and characterzations. I'm curious, is this a continuation of your first story? If so, are we going to learn what became of the main character's girlsfriend? I hope the smell of his mom's feet destroy him this time! Lol.
Author's Response:
this is indeed a continuation; we probably won't hear from his girlfriend in this story though, since it's just another short episode of the scenario
Date: August 10 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Awesome! more please!!!
Author's Response:
very soon!
Date: August 10 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
Excellent story! Really like where this is going!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Judy
This seems to be another great read. Loved the gentle an erotic bath she gave him. Seems like shes adding insult to injury by putting him in her sexy pump after she bathed him. (not that I'm complaining one bit, she has lovely feet an she's the perfect Milf IMO) now after that first chapter I can't wait an see where you take it from here.
aaron
ps love her choice in toe nail polish.
Author's Response:
you're probably right that the bath was negated by her putting him right into her shoe, although he wasn't really in a good place to argue with her logic. ;) thanks for reviewing