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Reviewer: Ace Jack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)

Oops sorry. 5 stars !

Reviewer: Ace Jack Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)

Master class. How to make such unrealistic scenarios enjoyable? You have combined believable characters with intriguing action. This is a true pleasure to read. Rarely do I comment, but this is superb work. Stop the story if you must, but do not abandon this genre.

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thank you for the review! i do enjoy this genre a lot, so i'll probably be coming back to it eventually

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)

 

That was gooood!!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5: Susan (Part 1)

Cant wait for the last chapter. 

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