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Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)

Nice story, you should follow up on this.



Author's Response:

I intend to.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)

I really liked that chapter. I was hoping we would get to see his mothers reaction to how badly Susan had beaten him. Susan was worse than all the other ladies combined. I really liked it a lot.

Dave



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)

loved the sequel.  Maybe a new idea for you would be a a short story on each of the 4 women mentioned in this story?  I'd like to find out what happens to Scott and the feet of Susan!



Author's Response:

i'll certainly consider it since these stories are short. thanks for the review

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: Susan (Part 2)

 

I would love a sequel to this story A++ work.



Author's Response:

gracias

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