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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

I see you decided to wrap up this story. Looks like they spent the rest of their lives as property of women. Sad for them, great for us.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.



Author's Response: You're welcome. And, thank _you_ for having the patience to stick around for the conclusion! :-)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

So, If... Gabe speaks Portuguese, and has become 'the', little 'good-luck' charm, for the Brazilian-waxed-indoor, Volley Ball Team, then... he'll also get to be the official bikini inspector for the all girl swim team too?

God, how could he get so lucky!  So what, if he never gets to see any of his co-workers again.  I'm sure that he's really 'put out', about it...  ;`)

 

 

 



Author's Response: It's more like Gabe will have to _learn_ Portuguese out of necessity. LOL!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 21

And would you believe, in the time since you sent your email (which I have no idea how much by Aust time has passed), this story is still at the very top of most recent.

Btw I once wrote a poem called "Chuck Roberts in the 21st Century", sending up Buck Rogers, except that it starts in the 1940s, and he awakens in 2004 to the massive culture shock of modern society.



Author's Response: Well, as of this moment (seven before three, American EDT), it's been demoted about half a dozen spaces or so. LOL! As for Buck Rogers? You're not too far off. The original Alex Raymond comic strip (and Buster Crabbe film serial adapation) had him going into suspended animation in the 1930's. It's only the first season of the 1970's tele-version that updated him to a space shuttle astronaut!

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