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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

I like 'Big-Sister', she is the bitchy giantess that you don't take home to mother! ;`)

Great job, man!

Reviewer: Northgate Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Great start although that part about tucking him in her panties was a bit on the edge.  I am hoping he gets to the big sister soon so we can have things get even more interesting.  Somehow I think meeting the big sister will be a case of "jumping from the frying pan into the fire" which will make it all the better.

 

Thanks and can't wait for Chapter 3.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

A lovely start. Just remember to put the speech on separate lines to the description. That's all for now.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Hummmm,......sounds familuer,  I like!   Great attention to detail!   Make it a long one, and I can't wait to meet big Sis!  (or Mommie for that matter!)   Great start, keep going.

 

 

                                                         *wildcatman*

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Great start. Hope to see more.


aaron

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Really great start.  Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

Good start so far. Keep going

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

looking good so far man cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: realsmall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Awakening

I like the attention to detail here!

Great Start!  And  hope to see more!

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