[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 11:04 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
wow thanks for the shout out :) Im just here to give authors encouragement to make great stories like this. Also I loved how the main title was about Liza I never thought it was about her lol but she was the real wild card her actions led to Franks sad Death :(. Im not mad at how he died, I like happy endings but they are harder to write. Drowning sucks but being digested is worse. I cant wait to read your next Story good luck! (FEED ME MORE!)
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 11:51 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
My prediction is that both of them got caught in the blast. They both fell on each other before the device fired. I call stalemate
Date: September 14 2012 10:34 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
It's a good start though the introduction sounded like it was from a TV show or movie for some reason. I think it's the "this is my stort kind of start". I'm still going to give your story a try becaue I think it has potential and I noted it has the maxiumum rating.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2012 8:59 AM Title: Humble Beginnings
As someone who doesn't usually get to the shrinkage until the second or third chapter, of his own stories, I applaud you for being an exception to the general rule. :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah maybe if I get inspiration for future stories I'll put some more set up. But for my first one I wanted to dive straight into the real bulk of it.