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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 10:54 AM Title: Game Time

Here:

 she wanted to play I had to accept it ( although something tells me I don't have a choice)

I feel you've repeated yourself.

and here:

" Yay! Maddison gleefully

You're missing a speech mark.

At risk of overanalyzing your story, it almost sounds like Madison has a split personality or maybe it was all part of her plan all along. Also, this is just the story I needed to welcome myself back the site. I've been inactive for a while and it seems I've been missing out on good things. Onwards!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 2:46 PM Title: Game Time

 

ok im going to vegas till monday plz for me add like 4ch lol I LOVE THIS STORY! Its going to be a long weekend

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2012 1:14 PM Title: Game Time

The scariest thing about this little (still more puns!) interaction? Maddison probably really does believe she was being gentle with him!

Talk about self-delusions. :-(

Author's Response:

A sad truth indeed. Franky better think of something before Maddison does something not so gentle ( in her mind).

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