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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 11:31 AM Title: Water Games

Here:

attempt to rest, as I found myself as I found myself

You repeat yourself. I think I will add this story to my favourites.



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing that out, corrected it. Even after pre-reading it and looking out for spelling erros I may not catch everything.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 10:13 AM Title: Water Games

 

this girl has no remorse lol. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2012 8:02 AM Title: Water Games

Elementary, my dear Edexdexx! Elementary.

Seriously, though. Maddison definitely has some issues. I mean; from her viewpoint, she might be having harmless fun. But, to Our Hero, at his present size? That's undeniably open to dispute.

Author's Response:

Indeed she does. Franky better stay strong to keep up his charade.

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