Date: September 28 2012 10:22 AM Title: Game Over
I don't think he did survive, Stub. Only the sliver of duct tape, gagging him, was removed. The rest of him was still wrapped up like an Egyptian mummy when he was dropped! :-(
[Report This]Date: September 28 2012 1:19 AM Title: Game Over
At least he survived; and because he survived that leaves the story open for a sequel. Hopefully he will meet someone nicer...
[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 1:26 PM Title: Game Over
Poor Franky! But, I like to think that, even in losing, he won.
Date: September 27 2012 9:08 AM Title: Game Over
Eh, it was kind of predictable at the end. You knew they would both turn on him. i was expecting a better payoff at the end. You even tease it at the end with Liza being nervous at the grave site. I thought she might turn on madison at that point, and then either continue with keeping Franky or toss him off as well. His last biting remark seems hollow now because it looks like Liza is Madison's friend now.
Author's Response:
Well yeah, it's easy to tell he wasn't going to get away with mouthing off to them unscathed. But, I don't wanna give too much away to the sequel however, worry not Liza and Maddison's situation won't go unaddressed.