[Report This]Date: May 24 2020 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Don't give up, we are waiting for you :(
Date: April 20 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sweat and shrinking aren't usually my cup of tea, but this is really well written and hot, I like the insecure giantess a lot, and her casual, almost brutal domination of the narrator!
Date: March 03 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please continue
Date: October 22 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
you promised nore but we didnt get it :(
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
This story deserves the ending we're all waiting for!
I just hope this ends upon Joe being forgotten inside Alex shoe while she puts on her shoes and goes to have her match of batkestball sealing Joe's fate!
I BEG YOU PLEASE, KEEP WRITTING THIS AWESOME STORY PLEASE!!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ehe ending of this chapter had me terrified too! I'm looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
This was one if my favorite chapters I hope u decide to complete the rest of this story
Date: September 12 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
Excellent story. I'm a big fan of sweaty fit giantesses, so this was a great read for me. The scenes are very detailed, I feel like I can see it. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
These characters are really interesting and I'd love more backstory on them if you have any planned. I hope you update this story soon because I'm really enjoying it so far.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
"Thanks to Afroking from the comments for emailing me to let me know he was still interested in seeing me continue the story" I wish all author were like u lol. Im so glad I wrote u because this is a great story and boom another great chapter. I love how Alex dosent seem to notice or care about Joey's frustration.Have u figured out an end size for Joey, I think it should be around 7 or 6inches. Only because Alex is already really tall. I hope Joey learns to want to worship Alex, instead of being made to worship her. thx for coming back im always here to help. Motivation for the WIN!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks again! I'm glad you're satisfied. We'll see how things play out...
Date: October 23 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Okay, It's been a while since the last chapter. What exactly was the change?
Also, I hope he dosen't shrink away to nothing at this rate.
Author's Response:
Almost nothing. I just took out a little bit at the end and added a short paragraph. I got ahead of myself and went against my original intention to not bother with explaining the shrinking and elaborating on a few other plotty things that just ended up being boring and no fun to read or write.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Although I didnt like the arm pit part, I'm enjoying this story alot. An will Joey shrink to around 2" tall?
But great story an hope to see more.
aaron
Author's Response:
First, thanks. I'm sorry you didn't like it, but I know not everything is going to appeal to everyone. All I can write is what I like.
And it's safe to say he'll get that small, fairly soon. He's more than several inches shorter than a foot in this chapter and the shrinking continues.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I commend you for taking it to the all powerful route but still keeping her loveable humanity.
I really like that demographic of the story and this is coming from a diehard humiliation etc lover at times.
Top notch good sir.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! I'm trying very hard to have the domination and humiliation action without making Alex sadistic or otherwise changing her character. As much as I love heartless giantesses most of the time, it's kind of unrealistic since I think most people are nicer than that. But I hope the way I write Alex is more believable, for what kind of fictional person she is.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
You really pile on the intensity as this chapter goes on. Great stuff, though of course it'll be pretty hard to sustain the next few chapters at this pitch, now.
Have to say that I really love the sentence, and the image, "Alex watched the game she was playing with childlike wonder." Very vivid, and it feels right, also. (She wants to pat him on the head, but she knocks him over instead--and, in her innocence, this entertains her, etc.)
Author's Response:
Thank you! There won't be many new chapters, I don't want to draw this one out too long.
I'm glad a sentence was able to resonate with you. That's all I can really ask for, to make a clear image of characters and situation in someone's mind. Thanks again!