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Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

are u still working on this story?



Author's Response:

I haven't abandoned it and will finish it eventually, but I just don't know when. Sorry.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

don't make me beg for more I have no shame.



Author's Response:

soon....

Reviewer: Nsolo6672 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

So glad this story is back! Thanks for coming back to wrap this wonderful story up. I have to ask - is Alex based off of a person you knew or met? Or is she an ideal giantess for you in your fantasies?

Author's Response:

Thanks. No, unfortunately, she's not based on anyone. I only wish I knew someone at all like Alex.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

 

"Thanks to Afroking from the comments for emailing me to let me know he was still interested in seeing me continue the story" I wish all author were like u lol. Im so glad I wrote u because this is a great story and boom another great chapter. I love how Alex dosent seem to notice or care about Joey's frustration.Have u figured out an end size for Joey, I think it should be around 7 or 6inches. Only because Alex is already really tall. I hope Joey learns to want to worship Alex, instead of being made to worship her. thx for coming back im always here to help. Motivation for the WIN!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks again! I'm glad you're satisfied. We'll see how things play out...

Reviewer: sketch Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

Okay, It's been a while since the last chapter.  What  exactly was the change?

 

Also, I hope he dosen't shrink away to nothing at this rate.



Author's Response:

Almost nothing. I just took out a little bit at the end and added a short paragraph. I got ahead of myself and went against my original intention to not bother with explaining the shrinking and elaborating on a few other plotty things that just ended up being boring and no fun to read or write.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

Although I didnt like the arm pit part, I'm enjoying this story alot. An will Joey shrink to around 2" tall?
But great story an hope to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

First, thanks. I'm sorry you didn't like it, but I know not everything is going to appeal to everyone. All I can write is what I like.

And it's safe to say he'll get that small, fairly soon. He's more than several inches shorter than a foot in this chapter and the shrinking continues.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 9

I commend you for taking it to the all powerful route but still keeping her loveable humanity.

 

I really like that demographic of the story and this is coming from a diehard humiliation etc lover at times.

 

Top notch good sir.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I'm trying very hard to have the domination and humiliation action without making Alex sadistic or otherwise changing her character. As much as I love heartless giantesses most of the time, it's kind of unrealistic since I think most people are nicer than that. But I hope the way I write Alex is more believable, for what kind of fictional person she is.

Reviewer: Survivor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Easily one of the greatest stories I've ever read.



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's a big compliment. Let me say that I really like your story "A Matter of Boredom" so far, and I hope you continue it.

Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

You really pile on the intensity as this chapter goes on. Great stuff, though of course it'll be pretty hard to sustain the next few chapters at this pitch, now.

Have to say that I really love the sentence, and the image, "Alex watched the game she was playing with childlike wonder." Very vivid, and it feels right, also. (She wants to pat him on the head, but she knocks him over instead--and, in her innocence, this entertains her, etc.)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! There won't be many new chapters, I don't want to draw this one out too long. 

I'm glad a sentence was able to resonate with you. That's all I can really ask for, to make a clear image of characters and situation in someone's mind. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

I want this story back im really missing it lol



Author's Response:

Hey I'm sorry about that. I'm trying to get back into the groove of writing, but the problem is that I hit kind of a snag where I wasn't satisfied with what I needed to do immediately after the ending of the last chapter. I wrote something but wasn't satisfied with it. So unfortunately the solution I came up with is kind of complex and requires like 2-3 chapters of content, and some stuff that's kinda tricky to write for me since it's mostly not going to be from Joe's perspective from the rest of the story. I should have kept it simple like I originally intended but, well, lol. 1-2 more days and I should have it done, but I've been a combination of busy and unmotivated unfortunately....

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I need more lol such a good story!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Really like this story. Thanks for posting it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on it.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

I don't see her as evil/oblivious. Just nervous somebody would take away the one person who ever really loved her.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely correct with that interpretation. I'm glad that apparently got across already.

Reviewer: Nsolo6672 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Tremendous story. I now find myself checking daily for new chapters. I like the pheromone aspect as cause of shrinking, as I have quite fantasized of something similar happening myself and my wife. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I am hoping that you continue to pen your ideas.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll try to get the chapters out as soon as I can. I'd like one day to have a wife/girlfriend to share these fantasies with, even if it's mostly impossible.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Honestly the shrinking can take as long as it needs. The interactions between these two alone are amazing thus even with the site format the size changing can wait as long as it possibly can.

 

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Oh, I didn't mean to imply anything with the shrinking comment. Just saying. I'm taking the shrinking at the same pace I intended from the beginning.

 

Thanks.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story, but I hope that it doesn't get too dark to where you lose the affection the characters have for each other evolving from curiosity and having a crush to fear and dominance.  Otherwise this has got to be one of the best stories that I have read on this site and love the way you have built up the story and character relations so far.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

First, thanks for reading and liking the story. I don't want to say too much about how the story will change, but I'll just reiterate that Alex isn't sadistic or evil, and won't become so.

Reviewer: Mobster Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story!!! Maybe one of the best on the site!

Author's Response:

Wow thanks!

Reviewer: edexdexx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is shaping up to be a very good story, I can't wait to see how Alex will react to Joe's shrinking.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is one of best slow shrinkers I've read. The fact she seems oblvious to it makes it all the nicer.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks! I don't know how much longer I can realistically keep her oblivious, however.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying this story. The idea that the scent is causing him to shrink is like an idea I've toyed with in stories, too. In my fantasy, the smell of the girl's feet causes shrinkage, including the feeling of humiliation.  I'm hoping that while he is attracted to scent at this point, that he comes to deeply regret it as he's around an inch tall. Of course, I prefer dark stories and want him to become crushed psychologically and emotionally at this girls' monstrous feet!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I don't want to reveal just how dark or not the story will be, or how the characters' feelings will change, because I think a lot of the fun in a story that makes you want to keep reading is seeing the tone evolve. Joe is definitely, in his rational mind, ashamed of how he feels about her scent. I hope I got that across clearly enough in the chapter.

I remember reading your story a while ago and enjoying it, despite not usually being in the mom-son gts stories.

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