Reviewer: Kyomi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2019 11:58 AM Title: Another Day

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Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2015 5:32 AM Title: Another Day

In all due respect, the first words that came to my mind were, "This man is a bonafide idiot." They haven't left me all the way to chapter 6. I'm sure this is a purposeful plot point. I like his situation, but I wish he would realize that if people aren't noticing, then it has to mean something, and he should ask about it, or at least figure it out. It really drew me thin to see someone so clueless and foolish.

Author's Response:

I hear ya, his naivette and overall dimwitedness to the realization he's in over his head is a major downfall of his. But mainly, he's writing it off as Dana's doing (also denial) and doesn't comprehend how people are really perceiving his loss of height.