Glad to see this story continued. I am rereading it.. When he is talking to Candace he originally addresses her as Ms . Candace or Miss Candace (can't remember) and answers her with yes ma'am . Should t he always answer her this way?
Enjoying it again,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Ack! That was an oversight on my part, I forgot to add that he had a very sarcastic inflection in the first chapter when he refered to Candace as m'am. Normally he doesn't use any honorifics when referring to Candace, and when he does it tends to be with a dose of snark.