Reviews For Devil's Advocate
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2016 3:03 AM Title: Don't Cross the Boss

Nice chapter. He should be subservient to Miss Candace. One, she is his boss and two he is a small child compared to her, size wise. Probably mentally also.
The two young girls were pretty cool also. Can't blame them for being interested.
Will Miss Candace get her wish and watch him shrink? That would be cool. Thanks for mentioning his new size. Rubbing her feet, how lucky for him.
Later,
Diesel

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2016 12:35 AM Title: Don't Cross the Boss

Haven't been reading much lately. But this story is really amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 4:42 AM Title: Don't Cross the Boss

Man, I can't believe she'd treat him that way, does nobody have any compassion for this guy? Anyway, isn't he supposed to get like super rich or something? Once he gets that maybe he could hire someone to be a bodyguard, I think most people would respect someone with money, regardless of their size.



Author's Response:

You can think of this as a snowball effect, rolling getting larger and larger. I haven't forgotten about the initial wish, Dana is going to do it in the most roundabout way possible. Most of the way people treat him can be atributed to her tweeks she made in his life and making sure it's as hard as possible because . .she's a devil.

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