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Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Like the story though, hope to see more of the sister.

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Great Story! Now that we know that Scott has siblings (Kyle and Maggie) around his own age, Mom should teach Maggie how to administer a "time-out" to her brothers when they misbehave.   A new familfy tradition passed down from every mother to their daughter.  Also, in the future, scotch tape could be used to attach Scott to everyday objects (high heels, brake pedals, exercise equipment, etc) for more serious punishments.  What do you think?



Author's Response:

It's like you read my mind.  I was planning on including Maggie in the fun near the conclusion of the story.

Reviewer: holymansam69 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

dude you awsome story the only thing u need and i speak for the majority just make it longer and foot sex

Author's Response:

the story will end up being a little longer than i said at first

Reviewer: tylby Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Cool dude! I want to continue. Let the son licking and kissing moms feet.



Author's Response:

there will certainly be some close interaction between them

Reviewer: TiniestofSparks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

I'm a huge fan of your last Time Out Series! It always makes my day when I see another chapter uploaded by you. I look forward to your infamous humiliation and crushing descriptions!



Author's Response:

thanks; i'll certainly do my best to match the other two

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

awesome, dood. also, i know its a prequel but could you please put a 6th chapter with an alternate non–canon ending where she turns him into her pet or swallows him? anyway i think its awesome

Author's Response:

thanks for reading/reviewing. i probably won't put anything like that in this story, but i'll certainly keep it in mind for future ones

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

I can't comment much because... well' there's hardly anything atm :)

Anyway I think the episodes of this series are your best stories -- the first 2 episodes were great, I have no reason to doubt this prequel will be just as good.

 

Thank you for writing them!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Very intrigued by this chapter. An would like to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

and more there shall be

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Your other two series of this story are great.  I expect this one to follow similarly. 



Author's Response:

I'll certainly do my best to match them.

Reviewer: sianichaoz Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Interesting to see more to this story, don't care for the mature feet... But ur writing is good! And nice to see a back story. I can see how the gf in the first story saw this and started to imagion her bf at her feet before the first... Might be why she was soo quite and focused.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I appreciate the objectivity even when you don't like mature feet.

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