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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 14: ZAYNI'S IN-SIGHT

Wow! I can hardly believe I read the past three chapters in one sitting! Then, again: I guess it just goes to show that riveting plot elements can seemingly shorten even the Long-est chapters.

*Waits for nauseous groan to subside before proceeding to chapter sixteen.*

Author's Response:

no nauseous groans, just the usual enjoyment of your skill with puns. I guess I left myself open to loads of "long" puns, given the character's name.

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