Date: May 01 2019 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please finish this story And Sweat and Tears! They are both lovely stories in different but special ways😭😭d84;
Date: March 13 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will you ever finish this? it has such amazing potential!
Date: December 09 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your right I just got lost into the story a little. Their was alot of emotion going on between them at the end of the ch.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, no problem. I hope my explanation made sense. Thanks as always for being a loyal reader of my stories.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to say I really like the premise of this story, nice work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you like how it develops as well.
Date: December 07 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is so freaking excellent. So promising! The characters are so solid in my mind, so believable, so awesome. Not jumping into it directly, which just makes it 10 times better.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad that people are finding the character's convincing.
Date: December 07 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
great story so far, the build up and then level of timid control she has over her brother... i'm waiting for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try not to overdo the buildup, but some is necessary. Thanks for stickng around.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Presumably she can also siphon off other qualities, too, along with height: intelligence, identity, equilibrium, musical or athletic talent, sense of place, eye and hair color, skin tone, etc. Am I right?
Author's Response:
Heh, well some of those things, definitely. I do have ideas related to taking things other than height, but that'll have to wait.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the concept and the characters, and I hope this story gets updated!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It will, I'm working on it right now. I'm working on my other story too, but just at a slower pace. I don't want a reputation for unfinished stories.
Date: December 06 2012 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story but I hope she dosent take full advantage of her brothers kindness. I just hope she stays gentle to her bro.
Author's Response:
Heh, well, we'll see. I do have a clear path imagined for how her character will develop and how she reacts to the change in power dynamic. But as I've said before I find it unrealistic when a girl goes from being nice/normal to completely sadistic for no reason other than she has a tiny person now.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow this is a very good and interesting set up,
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so. It's pretty difficult for me to come up with a unique situation (even though I don't necessarily believe you need a unique or even an explained 'catalyst' for the action in these kinds of stories per se).
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good, I am really anxious for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm working on it now.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very very promising, I like the concept, I like the setting, I like both of their characters that seem gentle and getting along well, I like the "feet" tag... I'm definitely keeping myself updated about this story, and looking forward to reading more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I tried to portray the characters as well as I could, it was hard to write the brother because I wanted him to be loving and responsible but not creepy. And yeah, pretty much anything I write will have feet in it, heh.