Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Rachel is shallow. Just getting over her old boyfriend, and onto a new one. She should be shot.

Or eaten. Whichever one

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good to see you back!

And I don't like Rachel, dream or not. Like she actually cares what happens to him.

Author's Response: Is it because she seems too shallow, or something else? Please let me know, I am always a bit worried that my character skills aren't as good as they should be, so I crave feedback in those areas. And yeah, it's good to be back.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it so far. Hope they can trust the sister! You never can tell with those cheerleading types.

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just discovered this story. It’s really good, that is I like how the giantess’ are so cold hearted to the underclassmen. The scenarios and situations are fantastic. My only problem would be about the world’s population. If so many freshmen died on their first day, how many would there be when they graduate? How could there be and seniors left when so many die at a whim when they are younger? Is the world—which you created—suffering from hyper-population? Are people born like jack-rabbits, so having so porta-sizers a way of controlling the population?

 

Like I said, I love the scenarios and situations you wrote. They are perfect! Personally, I would like to see some world-building and explanation to the society’s acceptance of porta-sizers. I love the story and hope to read more. Keep up the great work!!! J

 

Author's Response: Having one of my favorite authors come knocking with praise in a review is amazing. I normally prefer shrinking to growing to induce size inequality, but your story Love Drugs was a city-destruction piece that I absolutely fell in love with. And if you don't mind my asking, are you telepathic? Because the next chapter is going to feature just the answers you and the others have been asking for! I hope I haven't kept you waiting for it for too long, and that you will review my attempt at world-building. P.S. Since I only call the devices sizers in the story, is there a reason you called them "porta-sizers"? I hope you don't mind my asking, thanks again for letting me read a review from one of my favorite authors!

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

o.k., i do have a slight suggestions on how i would love the story to go. i am a HUGE fan of really tiny sizes and the situations which can arise from those tiny sizes- similar to how the girl snorted 40 students up her nose. more stuff like that would be amazing but you can do whatever want really.

Author's Response: Thanks for your willingness to take the time to put up front your thoughts on how you would like it to go. A writer really appreciates that. I can't promise any major micro action real soon, but I will see what I can do.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man, coming to this school is like a death sentence, the parents must be INSANE to let their kids go here...Its a great story to be sure, but its a little hard to take in, without some kind of background.

Author's Response: For you and all those who have been frustrated over that gaping plot hole, I immensely appreciate your willingness to continue with your suspense of disbeleif in the hopes that I will fill it in later. Don't worry, that piece has already been written, just not the rest of the chapter that contains it. It will come soon, I promise.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm seeing a bit of commentary here regarding ideas of realism, so I thought I'd add my two cents.  There's an important distinction to be made about realism in stories like this.  Obviously there's suspension of disbelief needed on the scientific anomalies/magical elements that these types of stories have to include to make sense, and that's fine.  Unless I'm mistaken, the kind of critiques you're getting here about realism have to do with your character personalities and the logistics of your fictional world.  No matter how many people shrink, you want reactions and events taking place as a result to mirror lifelike human emotion as closely as possible, as that will draw readers into the story better by allowing them to relate to what takes place.  In that way, I can see where people are coming from a little.

That said, you've actually got something pretty decent here.  The situation feels different enough from most of the content I've seen show up lately and you have some fun scenarios at play.  Your dialogue feels pretty varied, too, as you represent a variety of emotions here other than the usual run and panic mode of most shrunken characters.  Keep it up.

Author's Response: First timescribe, now the god-emperor of gts authorship himself have given me the go-ahead to continue? If you listen very faintly there is a hallelujah chorus playing in my head. And as for the obvious "why would a normal person voluntarily go to someplace where these things can happen" that you and several others have mentioned, I have that explanation planned out and is actually beggining it's inception of a rough draft right now in a later chapter, where it will be placed in the middle of an M/f scene so as to let those for whom M/f just isn't their thing be rewarded by a desperately-needed piece of backstory. Once again thank you for your review, I really hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, add another chapter, this story is great!

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, add another chapter, this story is great!

Reviewer: Ghost254 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really well written story. It has a lot of potential, so I encourage you to write more for this story. I literally took the time to decode my long lost account here, as I usually just read and not give reviews, to make sure you continue this story. 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I only hope the greatness you saw in the first update will be ewchoed in later ones to make getting back your account truly worthwhile.