Date: September 19 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
That Chloe chick is hot. I’m interested to see what she would do if she ever discovered her brother and friends at ½ inch tall. Is she the bitchy older sister that would torment her brother? Is she the caring ‘I got your back’ older sister? What about his friends? Would she extend her kindness to her shrunken brother’s friends? Or would she shove everyone in her pussy with the crushed freshie?
There are a lot of ways you could go with this story. The freshmen cheerleaders are going to have a lot of fun, that’s a given. But the adventurous friends are going to have to deal with Chloe. That’s where the real question comes in—how will she react?
How about, Chloe acts like a hard-ass around her friends, but then she’s privately gentle with the four friends? What if the four friends have to prove to Chloe that they are worthy to be restored? What if Chloe gets shrunked!?
Okay, I’m rambling. My red wine is kinda strong. I’ve been following your story since I discovered it, youlooktasty. Keep up the great work and don’t let the story die!