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Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic as alwasy my friend. I came up with a basic idea of the restaurant and you took it to an epic level. Well done with using the first  person. I am happy to see you writing again.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you liked it. I always feel nervous that I'm hijacking your concept when I write in Forbidden Dish, but I enjoy the concept so much.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Staring at her mouth transfixed.

Yep, that sums up how I react too.



Author's Response:

Yeah, those doom portals are intriguing.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oishi1,

                E-mail me , If you would like to chat, I have an open mind, and would love your opinion, on things.  There is a certain quality, that draws me to this idea, and I would very much like to exsplore it with you........

P.S.  Please don't let my E-mail address throw you,(ha), just made it for this site, spur of the moment! Ha,haa....

                                                                   *wildcatman*



Author's Response:

I can be contacted through my email in the contact author section on my profile here. Hit me up. I must let you know that Forbidden Dish is Girlfood's invention. My stories are a derivative.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is really well written, and the plot is very good, ....I'm not really into Vore, but the storie line flows very nicely....I like the way the women interact with the tiny men though,....kinda Dominating-tone in the way they speak however suttle....

 

     I'd like to see this cont', but maybe save a tinie, and take him home for some teasing and torchering, heh,heh,heh,  

                                                             *wildcatman*



Author's Response:

my buddy french snack wrote one about someone getting out. No torturing though.

 

http://aryion.com/g4/view/220419

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