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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2013 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

That was interesting. I think Nicole is a very strange and mysterious character and I'm not sure if I will take a liking to her.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

So, the hanky-panky will be delayed another chapter. That just whets our appetites all the more. Doesn't it?

;-)

Author's Response:

Good guess, I just uploaded chapter 4 with said hanky-panky, haha.

Reviewer: sm7in Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Aside from this story capturing my attention without any hint of giantess yet and flowing quite well, it also has me chuckling from time to time in a manner that is not only unexpected and different, but also at times sexually exciting, such as the last few sentences here in chapter 3. Well done.

 

I look forward to more! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, that part of the story is coming soon I promise.  I'm already finding it hard to find a place for humor, but I will keep your comments in mind going forward because I also think it can add a lot to a story.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: sundown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow.  such engrossing dialogue!!  Please, please continue.

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