Date: February 22 2013 7:01 AM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
You should try these free alternatives to Word Pad: Libre Office or Open Office. You can download them from their respective websites and donations are purely optional. Both come with a word processor, amoungst other things.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stubby, I'll check into that, I'm kinda 'habitual', with the 'Wordpad', and I hate to switch programs right in the middle of a story...
Date: February 21 2013 7:41 AM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
That was good. Wendy got what she deserved.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stubby, I havn't figuered out why the blank space, I think it has something to do with (Wordpad) I have to figure out how to remove it when I'm ready to post....
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 12:01 AM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
WHAT!?! Why, why would you do that! lol, ugh, another thing I hate along with unaware stories is when the little guy gets revenge! Tinies are meant to suffer at the feet of big powerful women :) And now Sarah is coming with more powder *sigh* don't think I am going to like where this is going. That said, still a great story and you should never allow myself or any reviewers to sway your stories, stick to your plan, the fact that your stories can move people to care about the outcome is a testament to your story telling.
Oh, and licking a guys feet? Really? That's gross! ;)
Author's Response:
Hang in there man, There'l be some wild twists and turns in this one! I do have somewhat of a general story-line. But, it's kinda cool to drift around and try to touch on a little bit of everything,.. Maybe Weny will realize that she has a foot fetish?
[Report This]Date: February 20 2013 9:42 PM Title: Ch. 16 switch-back
I see you made Tom a more dynamic character. And nice plot twist. Also, the infamous white space attacks again, this time becoming even larger!
Author's Response:
The white space increases more each chapter? I think I'm 'shrinking" man!