Date: July 26 2013 5:06 AM Title: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's
I had a lot of fun reading this story.
Although this sequence of events: the almost continuous torture and sexual abuse is not really what I am looking for... I must admit this actually was sort of a guilty pleasure for me.
You introduced some nice plot twists, although sometimes a bit confusing. And you kept it very fresh by introducing different characters in little side events. While the main storyline is captivating. I like the protagonist, Tom. He is (was) a hard working carpenter, a really nice guy. I really empathise with him, and what he has to endure.
I also find it very great that you spared Hailey.
Sorry that I can't go indepth on this story. This review is retroactive. I read this many weeks ago before I was a member on this site. But when I started reading I read from chapter 1 to 40 without a break (except for when real life called me).
Great work.
Date: June 19 2013 3:11 PM Title: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's
Great new chapter, love how the story is progressing. I just hope that Sara gets Tom and has some more wild adventures with him. But I like the story none the less.