[Report This]Date: March 08 2013 7:46 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
I've read the first 3 chapters and I'm liking the suspense so far. I think I can guess who he will end up with and I love where your going with this
Author's Response:
Yay double comment :D
[Report This]Date: March 08 2013 7:46 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
I've read the first 3 chapters and I'm liking the suspense so far. I think I can guess who he will end up with and I love where your going with this
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment Mr E its an honor to be positively reviewed by the man who wrote Christmas Eve at My Cousins Feet (one of my favorite storys)
Date: March 08 2013 12:45 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
What I meant by insertion is in the end notes for this chapter is this:
"By the way the next chapter is all about Priya so look foward to plenty of mouthplay, breastplay, and insertion."
Author's Response:
Ouch a lot of criticism today, but I understand you mean well. Yeah i was planning on squeezing all of that into one chapter and then it just didn't turn out like that sry ill remove that line as it is misleading btw almost done with the prologue.
Date: March 08 2013 10:31 AM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
This story is really confusing me. I'll see what the next chapter holds, though I'm a bit worried about the insertion you mentioned.
Author's Response:
I wanted to keep people reading by not revealing much and letting it slowly come into view, but I see now that all I have been doing is frustrating people so I will explain a bit more from now on. Also I don't understand what you mean about the insertion could you explain that last part to me?
[Report This]Date: March 02 2013 11:15 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
Wow. That was extremely unexpected way for this to turn out to me. Good sotry, really interesting way you incorporate stuff.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Ghost
[Report This]Date: March 02 2013 9:53 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
Damn, this is really, really, really good. Why is Josh acting like this? Hm, intriguing stuff man. Is Josh really alive? Or is he dead?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing again dude Its great to know it pleased you, as for Josh we will see how far from sane I can get him
Date: March 02 2013 9:36 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
Angela clearly has more issues than a subway news stand.
Author's Response:
hells yeah she does I can't wait until later chapters I have so much planned for her
[Report This]Date: March 02 2013 8:55 PM Title: Friendship and Betrayal
Damn! Keep Going DUDE!
Author's Response:
Oh trust me I will