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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 9:23 AM Title: The Graduation Gift

Angela's organization sounds like every cadre of super-villains I've ever read about in comic books ("Magnet's Brotherhood of Mutants," for example):

"The so-called 'normal' humans have ruined this world. It's time for Homo superior to ascend!"

But, if mixed couples like Angela and Josh can get along with each other--maybe even truly love each other--the improvement of our world in your stories need not be a totally violent one.

Thanks for sharing all this food-for-thought with us. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again Carycomic and I'm glad you enjoyed the ending as well.

As for Angela's organization (which is actually part cult, part corporation) it is very powerful and our two heros, one of which is of considerably smaller size than the others will have to work hard to bring it down.

I look foward to your support in the next part of this story.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2013 9:04 PM Title: The Graduation Gift

Bravo good sir!

 

I really liked it.



Author's Response:

Thank you AdamX and let  me tell you I am really happy that you do

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